Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-jimenez-p2psip-coap-reload-08

[Jaime Jiménez <jaime.jimenez@xxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Hi,

thanks for the comments, replies are inline. I will add those changes to the draft once the last call process is over.

Ciao,

- - Jaime Jimenez

On 27 Apr 2015, at 19:07, Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.

Document:  draft-jimenez-p2psip-coap-reload-08

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2015–4-27

IETF LC End Date: 2015–5-13

IESG Telechat date: 

 

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Standard Track  RFC.

 

 

Major issues:

Minor issues:

 

 

 

Nits/editorial comments:

Some questions about the terminology in section 3

1. Client – is this different from RFC6940, if not why repeat?

-- You are correct, it is the same, we can just add a reference to RFC6940

2. Router – this is a different name for a peer? I also noticed that it is used once in the document (defining constrained node) where it does not provide any value

-- Also agree, we could simply leave it in peer.

3. Proxy and Proxy node – Why do you need both terms. In section 7 it uses proxy(PN) like it is the same term.

-- This was done to differenciate between physical node and the role they play functionally. For the spec itself only the functional roles are important, the others just give a better picture of the types of nodes you can have. We could just call both Proxy Node if it helps. 

4. Constrained node the last sentence “In the latter case the node is often connected to a  continuous energy power supply” it is not clear what is the latter case, also what type of node is meant. Note that there is a redundant “either a” in the previous sentence.

-- Correct it should be:

"A CN is always either a Sensor or an Actuator.  If it is an actuator, the node is often connected to a continuous energy power supply."

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