Thanks Alexey for the review. I'll get your requested change made. I need to work out how best to do this at this stage. Thanks, Dave Sent from my iPhone > On Apr 8, 2015, at 10:02 AM, "Alexey Melnikov" <alexey.melnikov@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > My apologies for the very late review. > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > This review is in response to a request for early Gen-ART review. > > Document: draft-ietf-sacm-use-cases-09 > Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov > Review Date: 2015-04-08 > IETF LC End Date: 2015-03-16 > IESG Telechat date: 2015-04-09 > > Summary: Ready > > Major Concerns: None > > Minor Concerns: None > > Nits: > > In Section 2.1.1: > > >* Guidance that specifies how old collected data can be to be > > used for evaluation. > > Either delete "can be" or "to be". > >