the IETF document says:
The IETF is a global organization that produces voluntary standards, whose goal is to make the Internet work better [RFC3595]. IETF standards are published in the RFC series. The IETF is responsible for the key standards that are used on the Internet today, including IP, TCP, DNS, BGP, and HTTP, to name but a few.
Query: is HTTP maintained by IETF or by W3C? I see the note from Mark Nottingham referencing HTTPbis WG and RFCs 7230-7235 so I assume this WG must have collaborative involvement of W3C participants also?
It is important to note that the IETF includes anyone who wishes to participate. Staff and participants from ICANN or the Regional Internet Registries (RIRs) regularly participate in IETF activities.
Query: Should any others be mentioned explicitly in addition to the RIRs?
The routing architecture has evolved over time, and is expected to continue to do so. Such evolution may have an impact on appropriate IP address allocation strategies. As and when that happens, we will consult with the RIR community, as we have done in the past.
Query: should this say "consult and coordinate"?
IETF standards changes may have impact on operations of RIRs and service providers. A recent example is the extensions to BGP to carry the Autonomous System numbers as four-octet entities [RFC6793]. It is important to note that this change occurred out of operational necessity, and it demonstrated strong alignment between the RIRs and the IETF.Query: one would have thought the ISPs and Operator Groups (e.g. NANOG) would also have been involved?In the case where someone claims that the procedures themselves are insufficient or inadequate in some way to address a circumstance, one may appeal an IAB decision to the Internet Society Board of Trustees.Query: Is this still an operational practice?Appendix A. Changes NOTE: This section to be removed by RFC Editor at publication.
I assume any references to appendices will be revised to reflect the elimination of Appendix A?In appendix C we read:8 September 2014 Introduction Under the IANA1 Stewardship Transition Coordination Group (ICG) Charter,2 the ICG has four main tasks:Query: some formatting problem has turned IANA <footnote 1> into IANAL - "I am not a lawyer" !!"Chater,2..." which also looks odd.another small formatting error in Appendix C:(ii) Assess the outputs of the three operational communities for compatibility and interoperability (iii) Assemble a complete proposal for the transition (iv) Information sharing and public communicationQuery: presumably section (iii) should be set off with its own paragraphGenerally there appears to be something odd about the paragraph numbering in Appendix C, with more than one section set off as "0. " followed by a section numbered Roman Numeral I. Is this intentional?