I will be tracking issues raised in this re-review. Note this, in particular, from the last call note: > In particular, the IESG needs to know about substantive issues that have > not been addressed appropriately in this version. Comments should clearly > mark each actionable issue that they are raising, and should clearly state > what action they are asking for. Please suggest specific text, where that is > appropriate. Let's try to keep this, as much as possible, away from small editorial things, and raise what we consider to be significant issues with the document. Please give *this* version a thorough review, and don't try to use diffs from earlier versions. Is this version ready to go? If not, what are the issues -- specifically enumerated? If your issue is asking for a text change or addition, specifically what do you want the new text to look like? I'll be using the appsawg issue tracker, purely because it exists and has the right access permissions -- this document has nothing to do with appsawg. All issues for this document will be in the component "opportunistic-security", here: http://trac.tools.ietf.org/wg/appsawg/trac/report/10 Barry