On Wed, Jul 30, 2014 at 05:31:14PM +0000, Viktor Dukhovni wrote: > > "OS strives to greatly broaden the use of encryption in IETF protocols, > > to combat PM. To facilitate incremental deployment, OS operates in > > a fashion that may result in a plaintext connection/session." > > This is I think addressed by the "Encrypt by default" principle, > but perhaps the below change helps to get the point across: > > [...] That change and a few more are in the -02 version: A new version has been submitted for draft-dukhovni-opportunistic-security: http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-dukhovni-opportunistic-security-02.txt Diff from previous version: http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-dukhovni-opportunistic-security-02 Summary of changes: - Replaced undefined "strong protection" with "protection against both passive and active attacks". - Moved Terminology section up between the Introduction and the Design Principles (body) section. - More references. - Split some run-on sentences. If anyone feels strongly that some of the original text was better, please speak up... -- Viktor.