Review comments: Section 2.2.1 There are also additional modes of sugar than cane sugar. It should support sugar beet sugar. So section 2.2.1 sugar-beet and sugar-cane should be included in the options. Tea has state(s) - it is either brewed or unbrewed , as well as cold or hot. There needs to be an optional state monitor reporting {brewed | unbrewed } and { hot | cold }. I'm undecided if there should be a { sat-too-long-and-is-cold | fresh } message. Perhaps a wider review would be helpful. Finally is there any requirement for a parameter to specify ice? -rgd > On Apr 1, 2014, at 3:49 PM, "Andrew G. Malis" <agmalis@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > As a tea drinker, I'm very happy to see this extension to RFC 2324. > However, many people drink their tea with lemon, and that doesn't > really fit into any of the addition-types in section 2.2.1. Another > addition-type may be required. > > Cheers, > Andy > > >> On Tue, Apr 1, 2014 at 6:00 PM, <rfc-editor@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: >> A new Request for Comments is now available in online RFC libraries. >> >> >> RFC 7168 >> >> Title: The Hyper Text Coffee Pot >> Control Protocol for Tea Efflux Appliances >> (HTCPCP-TEA) >> Author: I. Nazar >> Status: Informational >> Stream: Independent >> Date: 1 April 2014 >> Mailbox: inazar@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx >> Pages: 7 >> Characters: 14490 >> Updates: RFC 2324 >> >> I-D Tag: draft-nazar-htcpcp-tea-00.txt >> >> URL: http://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7168.txt >> >> The Hyper Text Coffee Pot Control Protocol (HTCPCP) specification >> does not allow for the brewing of tea, in all its variety and >> complexity. This paper outlines an extension to HTCPCP to allow >> for pots to provide networked tea-brewing facilities. >> >> >> INFORMATIONAL: This memo provides information for the Internet community. >> It does not specify an Internet standard of any kind. Distribution of >> this memo is unlimited. >> >> This announcement is sent to the IETF-Announce and rfc-dist lists. >> To subscribe or unsubscribe, see >> http://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf-announce >> http://mailman.rfc-editor.org/mailman/listinfo/rfc-dist >> >> For searching the RFC series, see http://www.rfc-editor.org/search >> For downloading RFCs, see http://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc.html >> >> Requests for special distribution should be addressed to either the >> author of the RFC in question, or to rfc-editor@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx. Unless >> specifically noted otherwise on the RFC itself, all RFCs are for >> unlimited distribution. >> >> >> The RFC Editor Team >> Association Management Solutions, LLC >