I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-fairhurst-ipdvb-ule-iana-05 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: February-27-2014 IETF LC End Date: February-28-2014 IESG Telechat date: TBD Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. [Ready with nits.] This document updates the IANA rules for maintenance of the ULE Next-Header registry, as originally specified in RFC 4326. Nits: General nits: Throughout the document, make all references to the registry in question read "Next-Header registry" for consistency with RFC 4326, except in titles or section headers where each word would be capitalized. Specific nits: Page 1, Title: consider inserting "Next-Header" between "ULE" and "Registry" since that's the registry in question. Page 1, Abstract, 2nd sentence: change "codepoints" to "code points" to align with RFC 4259 and ATSC usage. Page 3, Section 2.1, 1st sentence of the 1st and second paragraphs: you refer to Mandatory Extension Headers and Optional Extension Headers registries. From RFC 4326, these are really subdivisions of the single Next-Header registry. You might want to rephrase those sentences to reflect that you are not defining two registries. Page 3, Section 2.1, 1st paragraph, 3rd sentence: Should that be "or the specified protocol" or "of the specified protocol"? I wasn't certain from the context in RFC 4326 how the type values are used. Page 3, Section 3, 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence: replace "these" with "them". Page 5, 1st partial paragraph, last sentence: change "can not" to "cannot"; change "guarenteed" to "guaranteed". Page 5, 1st full paragraph, last sentence: insert "is" between "that" and "to". Page 5, Section 4, 1st paragraph: insert "an" between "record" and "additional" Section 8: as this section will be removed, no corrections are noted. -Peter Yee