Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-multipath-use-03

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Many thanks for your (once again) detailed review, Peter! And thank you Curtis for making the fixes. One comment below:

>> Make all references to the expansion of ECMP read "Equal-Cost Multipath" for
>> consistency with RFC 2991.
> 
> ECMP is expanded on first use in compliance with RFC Editor quidelines
> for abbreviations.  ECMP is also expanded on first use within each
> section where it is used with the exception of one place where ECMP is
> contained in a verbatim excerpt in a quote from RFC6374.

I thought Peter was referring to the fact that your draft has some variation on the way the term is expanded, even outside verbatim examples:

> % grep -i 'equal' draft-ietf-mpls-multipath-use-03.txt
> draft-ietf-mpls-multipath-use-03.txt:94:   than parallel links includes Equal Cost MultiPath (ECMP) as applied
> draft-ietf-mpls-multipath-use-03.txt:148:   Equal Cost Multipath (ECMP)
> draft-ietf-mpls-multipath-use-03.txt:149:       Equal Cost Multipath (ECMP) is a specific form of multipath in
> draft-ietf-mpls-multipath-use-03.txt:229:       Equal-Cost Multi-Path (ECMP) load-balancing MUST NOT be performed
> draft-ietf-mpls-multipath-use-03.txt:288:   following paragraph in "Section 2.9.4 Equal Cost Multipath" gives the
> …
> % grep -i "equal" rfc2991.txt
> rfc2991.txt:   allow "Equal-Cost Multipath" (ECMP) routing.  Some router
> …

I think you could align other instances than those relating to verbatim text from RFC 5960 or 6374.

Anyway, minor things. I have balloted no-objection for this draft for the Thursday's IESG telechat. Thanks for your hard work, all.

Jari






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