OK, if we're going to get stuck on the example, we should take it out. As Sam said, it's the least necessary part. I still think the phrase in the first sentence "including which existing technology is re-used" could be better.
OK, if we're going to get stuck on the example, we should take it out. As Sam said, it's the least necessary part. I still think the phrase in the first sentence "including which existing technology is re-used" could be better.