Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-pkix-est-07

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-pkix-est-07

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2013–6–22

IETF LC End Date: 2013-6–24

IESG Telechat date: 2013-6–27

 

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as Standard track RFC.

 

This is not a comment, I read the draft and not being an expert in this area I found it clear for me to read. The document structure made it easier to read.

 

Major issues:

 

Minor issues:

 

 

Nits/editorial comments:

1.  In section 4.5.2 “to use the the secp384r1 elliptic curve” repeated “the”

 


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