Re: Last Call: <draft-eastlake-rfc5342bis-02.txt> (IANA Considerations and IETF Protocol and Documentation Usage for IEEE 802 Parameters) to Best Current Practice

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At 04:07 07-05-2013, The IESG wrote:
The IESG has received a request from an individual submitter to consider
the following document:
- 'IANA Considerations and IETF Protocol and Documentation Usage for IEEE
   802 Parameters'
  <draft-eastlake-rfc5342bis-02.txt> as Best Current Practice

The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits
final comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the
ietf@xxxxxxxx mailing lists by 2013-06-04. Exceptionally, comments may be

Sorry for the late comments. I'll defer to the authors on what to do about them.

In Section 2.1.3:

  "o  must be for standards purposes (either for an IETF Standard or
      other standard related to IETF work),"

The above is not that clear. I suggest using "IETF Review". BTW, the documentation requirement could also be fulfilled with "Specification Required".

Section 2.3.2.1 mentions changes to RFC 2153. I suggest having an "Updates:" for that RFC.

In Section 3.1:

  "o  the assignment must be for standards use (either for an IETF
      Standard or other standard related to IETF work),"

IETF Review (see previous comment about that) could be used.

In Section 4:

  "If different policies from those above are required for such a
   parameter, a BCP or Standards Track RFC must be adopted updating this
   BCP and specifying the new policy and parameter."

"Standards Action" could be used for this.

In Section 5.1 I suggest using "IESG Approval". BTW, IESG Ratification of an Expert Review approval recommendation looks unusual to me.

Regards,
-sm






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