[Gen-art] review: draft-ietf-cuss-sip-uui-10

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Document: draft-ietf-cuss-sip-uui-10
    A Mechanism for Transporting User to User
        Call Control Information in SIP
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 19-May-2013
IETF LC End Date: 29-May-2013
IESG Telechat date: N/A

Summary: This document is nearly ready for publication as a Proposed Standard

Major issues:

Minor issues:
The requirements discussions for redirection and referral (second paragraph of section 3, in regards REQ-3) includes what appears to be normative requirements on redirecting devices.
a) This would seem to belong in section 4 on Normative Definition.
b) It would seem that there ought to be some discussion of what happens with redirecting devices that do not understand this new UUI. (I presume things work, but I don't see how.)

Nits/editorial comments:
In section 8.2, given that this is a WG document, should the "the authors believe" actually be "the WG believes"? Or even, given IETF rough consensus on this document, "the IETF believes"?




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