[Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6021-bis-01

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Document: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6021-bis-01
    Common YANG Data Types
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 19-April-2013
IETF LC End Date: 1-May-2013
IESG Telechat date: N/A

Summary: This document is nearly ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC

Major issues:
    (The following may well be a non-issue.)
In the revision of the ietf-inet-types, the patterns for the new ip4-address-no-zone and ipv6-address-no-zone are drastically simplified from the ipv4-address and ipv6-address patterns. The new ipv4-address-no-zone allows any sequence of decimal digits an periods, while the original was carefully defined as dotted quads of 0..255. Similarly, te ipv6-address-no-zone allows any arbitrary sequence of hex digits and colons. The original patterns were very careful to match rules for validity. Is there a reason for the change.

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:




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