The -07 version of this draft addresses all of the nits noted in the Gen-ART review of the -06 version. This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC. Thanks, From: Black, David I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please Reviewer: David L. Black This draft covers defect behavior for Ethernet pseudowires, including defect state mapping and PE defect reporting behavior. The draft is generally in good shape. I found a few minor nits. 1) The draft uses a lot of acronyms - while each acronym appears to be expanded on first use, an additional section near the start of the draft listing all of them would be helpful. 2) There's a typo in the first paragraph of section 2: covers the following Ethernet OAM (Opertaions, Administration and Opertaions -> Operations. 3) The following normative reference is incomplete - please add additional information that will enable a reader to locate the referenced document: [MEF16] "Ethernet Local Management Interface", MEF16, January 2006. 4) idnits 2.12.13 did not like the pagination: == The page length should not exceed 58 lines per page, but there was 22 Thanks, --David ---------------------------------------------------- |