Hi Ben, One reply in line. We will bring out another revision after taking care of your suggestions once we have some more review comments. Regards, Bharat > Thanks for the timely response, and the background for the security > language. > > This brings up one question, however. See inline: > > Thanks! > > Ben. > > On Dec 21, 2012, at 6:48 AM, RAMAKRISHNADTV <RAMAKRISHNADTV@xxxxxxxxxxx> > wrote: > > > Hi Ben, > > > > Thank you for your review comments. > > Please find my responses inline below. > > > > Regards, > > Ramakrishna DTV. > > > >> -----Original Message----- > >> From: Ben Campbell [mailto:ben@xxxxxxxxxxx] > >> Sent: Thursday, December 20, 2012 2:45 AM > >> To: draft-ietf-dhc-relay-id-suboption.all@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx > >> Cc: gen-art@xxxxxxxx Review Team; ietf@xxxxxxxx List > >> Subject: Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-dhc-relay-id-suboption-11 > >> > >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > >> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > >> > >> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > >> > >> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments > >> you may receive. > >> > >> Document: draft-ietf-dhc-relay-id-suboption-11 > >> Reviewer: Ben Campbell > >> Review Date: 2012-12-19 > >> IETF LC End Date: 2013-01-07 > >> > >> Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as a proposed > >> standard. However, there is one comment from a prior review that I am > >> not sure whether is resolved. > >> > >> Major issues: > >> > >> None > >> > >> Minor issues: > >> > >> -- In Sean Turner's 2009 review of version 07 of the document [ > >> http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art/current/msg04614.html ], > he > >> made the following comment: > >> > >>> In the security considerations it says look to RFC 3046 and > >>> RFC 4030 for security considerations and then says SHOULD use the > >> relay > >>> agent authentication option from RFC 4030. RFC 3046 is targeted at > >>> network infrastructures that are "trusted and secure" and RFC 4030 > >>> allows the relay agent to be part of this trusted and secure > network. > >>> If an implementation doesn't use the relay agent authentication > >> option, > >>> then the relay agent can't be part of the "trusted and secure" > >> network. > > > > RFC3046 created the relay agent information option. > > Relay agent information option exists only in the messages between > > relay agents and DHCP servers. RFC3046 is targeted at network > infrastructures > > that are "trusted and secure" as far as the paths among relay agents > and DHCP > > servers is concerned. In many deployments, relay agents and DHCP > servers > > are under a single administrative control. By careful design and > engineering > > of the network, it is possible to ensure that the network > infrastructure > > comprising relay agents and DHCP server is trusted and secure. To > achieve that, > > RFC4030 may be used but is not a MUST. If not, RFC4030 would already > be a MUST > > for RFC3046 deployment. But that is not currently the case. > > Is the SHOULD use 4030 language a new normative requirement, or is it > simply describing existing requirements from 3046 or elsewhere? If it's > a new normative requirement, then I am fine with your answer and > withdraw the concern. If not, then it would be better to use descriptive > rather than normative language in this draft. > Yes. Also as mentioned by Ted, this draft is using a language similar to some existing RFCs. **************** CAUTION - Disclaimer ***************** This e-mail contains PRIVILEGED AND CONFIDENTIAL INFORMATION intended solely for the use of the addressee(s). If you are not the intended recipient, please notify the sender by e-mail and delete the original message. Further, you are not to copy, disclose, or distribute this e-mail or its contents to any other person and any such actions are unlawful. This e-mail may contain viruses. Infosys has taken every reasonable precaution to minimize this risk, but is not liable for any damage you may sustain as a result of any virus in this e-mail. You should carry out your own virus checks before opening the e-mail or attachment. Infosys reserves the right to monitor and review the content of all messages sent to or from this e-mail address. Messages sent to or from this e-mail address may be stored on the Infosys e-mail system. ***INFOSYS******** End of Disclaimer ********INFOSYS***