>> In particular: should bullet 15,2 (and its supporting text elsewhere) >> be removed? > > 15,2 should probably say "People employed in the IETF Secretariat….". > > I would leave it in. My thinking is that the IESG, IAB, and IAOC have oversight > roles over the Secretariat and RFC Editor. Having people employed by these > organizations be directly involved in the selection of the IESG, IAB, and IAOC > would be odd. Yes, that was the intent of having it in. The devil, though, is in the details. Do others have wisdom to add here? Barry