--On Thursday, July 05, 2012 14:19 -0700 Paul Hoffman <paul.hoffman@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > Based on many people's input (most recently, John's), I have > updated the draft to more cleanly separate out the history of > the Tao from the change that is happening. Paul, While I'd prefer to see you go even further in that direction (e.g., incorporating more of the RFC 4677 Abstract in this abstract, constructing things so that changes in the details of editing procedures doesn't require a revised RFC), this version is, IMO, greatly improved. thanks john