Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-srtp-vbr-audio-03

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-avtcore-srtp-vbr-audio-03
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date: 2011-10-21
IETF LC End Date: 2011-10-24

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a BCP.

Major issues:

None

Minor issues:

None

Nits/editorial comments:

-- section 1, paragraph 2: "...can be recognised with high accuracy…"

That seems like a bit more than a "small amount of information"

-- section 2, 1st paragraph: "… is already considered a hard problem"

Who considers it?

-- section 4, last paragraph: "It is, however, still expected…"

Who expects it?

-- section 6: 

It might be worth mentioning that this entire draft is about security.
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