I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-genarea-milestones-tool-05 Reviewer: Ben Campbell Review Date: 2011-09-29 IETF LC End Date: 2011-09-21 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an informational RFC Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: -- Abstract: The abstract should mention that this updates 6292. -- section 3, last paragraph, last sentence: "A WG chair also needs to be able to delete one or more existing milestones." That sentence seems redundant with the last sentence of the previous paragraph -- section 4, last paragraph: "After this tool is launched, the IETF Secretariat will no longer need to post a change to the database: the tool will do this without intervention by the Secretariat." Except in the aforementioned case of the secretariat doing this to fix a problem or in an emergency. _______________________________________________ Ietf mailing list Ietf@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf