I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-mpls-rsvp-te-no-php-oob-mapping Reviewer: Ben Campbell Review Date: 2011-08-12 IETF LC End Date: 2011-08-12 Summary: This document is almost ready for publication as a proposed standard. There are a few editorial issues and nits that should be considered prior to publication. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: -- Please proofread for missing articles (i.e. a, an, the) -- idnits reports some issues, please check. -- section 1: It would be helpful to include an explicit definition of " non-Penultimate Hop Popping behavior" somewhere in the introduction. -- section 1, paragraph 2: "P2MP" Please expand on first mention. I see you did in the abstract, but it should be redone in the body. -- section 2.2, last paragraph: "w.r.t." Please spell out -- section 3: First paragraph: " Addition of "non-PHP behavior" adds a variable of attacks on the label assigned by the Egress node. " Is "variable" the correct word? -- IANA Considerations: Please include the explicit names of the registry to be changed. -- 6.1, "[RFC 2119]" The space between RFC and 2119 confused idnits, and may confuse other tools. -- 6.1, [RFC5920] This is an informational draft. Does the reference need to be normative? -- general: I am unable to read the title without thinking of this: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hop_on_Pop :-) _______________________________________________ Ietf mailing list Ietf@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf