I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-roll-of0-14 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2011–6–27 IETF LC End Date: 2011–7–4 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC. Please note the Nits. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. The “requirement language" is usually in the terminology section and not with the abstract. 2. In section 7.2 first paragraph replace “tthat” with “that” 3. In section 7.2 third paragraph replace “he current Version Number” with “the …” |
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