Hello, I've reviewed this document as part of the transport area directorate's ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's authors for their information and to allow them to address any issues raised. The authors should consider this review together with any other last-call comments they receive. Please always CC tsv-dir@xxxxxxxx if you reply to or forward this review. Summary: This draft specifies protocol for PANA Relay Element that can relay messages between a PaC and a PAA where they cannot reach each other. The proposed function is simple and straightforward and useful. I couldn't find any transport related issues in the draft. Minor comments: Please consider clarifying the following points. 1) I think clarifying communication model of this proposal will be helpful for readers. It seems to me that a PRE should communicate only one PAA. But, can a PAA communicate multiple PREs? 2) The draft seems to presume PRE to be a multi-homed node. But, is this mandatory requirement? Is it possible to use single-homed node as a PRE? 3) Is it possible to place a PRE behind NAT? Is there any concern for this? 4) How p2 (PRE-assigned UDP port number) is determined? Is it possible to use ephemeral port? If so, the protocol will need to be robust against PRE rebooting. Similarly, can we use dhcp-ed address for IP2b? Regards, -- Yoshifumi Nishida nishida@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx _______________________________________________ Ietf mailing list Ietf@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf