Re: [v6ops] Review of: draft-ietf-v6ops-v6-aaaa-whitelisting-implications-03 *(formal for apps area)*

["Livingood, Jason" <Jason_Livingood@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

On 5/31/11 12:00 PM, "Tony Finch" <dot@xxxxxxxx> wrote:

Speaking of confusing, the first sentence of the abstract and introduction

in the current revision of the draft is an abomination that should be

taken out and shot.

[JL] Great feedback – I just did it. Here's the updated Abstract (carried into the Intro as well). If you think it is still convoluted, just say so and I'll take another turn at it.

New text:

"This document describes the practice and implications of whitelisting DNS recursive resolvers in order to limit AAAA resource record responses (which contain IPv6 addresses) sent by authoritative DNS servers. This is an IPv6 transition mechanism used by domains as a method for incrementally transitioning inbound traffic to a domain from IPv4 to IPv6 transport. The audience for this document is the Internet community generally, particularly IPv6 implementers."

Thanks!

Jason

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