Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-enhanced-dsmap-09

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.

 

Document: draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-enhanced-dsmap-09

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2011–5–24

IETF LC End Date: 2011–5–30

IESG Telechat date:

 

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC.

 

Major issues:

 

Minor issues:

 

 

Nits/editorial comments:

 

1.       Need to expand LDP when first mentioned.

2.       Section 3.3.1.1 “The multipath data sub-TLV includes information multipath information” delete the first information.

3.       In section 3.3.1.2 “When the Downstream Detailed Mapping TLV in sent in the echo response” should be is sent.

 

 

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