Security review of draft-ietf-ippm-tcp-throughput-tm-12.txt Do not be alarmed. I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other review comments. >From the document Intro: This framework recommends a methodology for measuring TCP Throughput in order to provide meaningful results with respect to user experience. I had a little bit of trouble understanding the purpose of the document, having stumbled across these two statements which when juxtaposed, seem to contradict one another: Introduction ... Note that the primary focus of this methodology is managed business class IP networks; i.e. those Ethernet terminated services for which organizations are provided an SLA from the network provider. Because of the SLA, the expectation is that the TCP Throughput should achieve the guaranteed bandwidth. ... 2. Scope and Goals ... - This methodology is not intended to measure TCP Throughput as part of an SLA [Remember the New Yorker magazine's "Our Forgetful Authors"?] It is difficult to frame the security requirements for a measurement framework, and this document does not try: 6. Security Considerations The security considerations that apply to any active measurement of live networks are relevant here as well. See [RFC4656] and [RFC5357]. I am not sure what to infer from this statement. That the RFCs define all possible security requirements and considerations? That their definitions coincide with what the authors of the current document recommend? That the solutions defined by the other RFCs SHOULD be be part of the framework defined by the current document? MAY? It depends? It's my recommendation that the security considerations be expanded to explicitly list the security requirements for the framework. _______________________________________________ Ietf mailing list Ietf@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf