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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For
background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last
Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-thaler-v6ops-teredo-extensions-07 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: August 4, 2010 IETF LC End Date: 2010-08-12 IESG Telechat date: (if known) Summary: This draft is roughly ready for publication as a
Proposed Standard. I have some comments: Major issues: None Minor issues: 1. In section 4.1 defines type-length-value (TLV) encoded trailers.
Can new trailers be defined later and if yes what is the procedure to do it and
assign type numbers. If new trailers are not allowed it will be good to state
it also. 2. In section 5.6.4.1 it says that “the Alternate Address Trailer
MUST include the node's local address/port in the Alternate Address/Port list.
If the UPnP Mapped Address/Port is non-zero, the Alternate Address Trailer MUST
also include it in the list.” I understood from 3.5 and 6.5 that UPnP support
on the NAT is required in which case the alternate address trailer must have a
UPnP address or is the requirement for UPnP is needed only when the two peers
are connected via more than one NAT in the private address space as section 3.5
and 6.5 describe. Please clarify. Nits/editorial comments: none |
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