Gen-ART LC review of draft-thaler-v6ops-teredo-extensions-07

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

 

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.

 

Document: draft-thaler-v6ops-teredo-extensions-07

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date: August 4, 2010

IETF LC End Date: 2010-08-12

IESG Telechat date: (if known)

 

Summary: This draft is roughly ready for publication as a Proposed Standard.

I have some comments:

 

Major issues: None

 

Minor issues:

1.  In section 4.1 defines type-length-value (TLV) encoded trailers. Can new trailers be defined later and if yes what is the procedure to do it and assign type numbers. If new trailers are not allowed it will be good to state it also.

2.  In section 5.6.4.1 it says that “the Alternate Address Trailer MUST include the node's local address/port in the Alternate Address/Port list.  If the UPnP Mapped Address/Port is non-zero, the Alternate Address Trailer MUST also include it in the list.” I understood from 3.5 and 6.5 that UPnP support on the NAT is required in which case the alternate address trailer must have a UPnP address or is the requirement for UPnP is needed only when the two peers are connected via more than one NAT in the private address space as section 3.5 and 6.5 describe. Please clarify.

 

 

 

Nits/editorial comments: none

 

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