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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For
background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last
Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-bmwg-igp-dataplane-conv-meth-21 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: IETF LC End Date: 2010-06-25 IESG Telechat date: (if known) Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an
Informational RFC. There are some nits. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. All over the document there are abbreviations that are not
expanded in full the first time they are used or at all. Examples are DUT,
BMWG,.. I suggest that the editor will go through the document and specify all
abbreviations. 2. In section 4.1 the draft mention to loss-derived and
Rate-Derived methods. There is a reference to Rate-Derive method later in the
section but no reference to loss-derived method. 3. I saw the reference to
draft-ietf-bmwg-igp-dataplane-conv-term-20, which is a work in progress, when
looking for Rate-derived Method and noticed that part of the text in 6.2.1 is
copied from the terminology document. I agree that it makes it easier to read
this document if the text is copied but maybe add a note that will say which
one is the right one in case the terminology draft will change before it is
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