Hi Jerry We will include in the Appendix a similar example as the one given in Section 3.4 of the QSPEC draft. Best regards, Georgios On 3/2/2010, "Gerald Ash" <gash5107@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: >One more comment: > >Section 3.1 of the QSPEC draft http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-nsis-qspec-24#section-3.1 lists requirements for QOSM specifications including "QNE processing rules describing how QSPEC information is treated and interpreted"and "at least one bit-level QSPEC example". > >While the RMD draft has examples in Appendix A of individual processing functions, there is no overall, end-to-end example given of QSPEC composition and processing from QNI to QNR and back again. IMO this would greatly help an overall understanding of RMD functionality. > >Such QSPEC processing examples are given in Sections 4.4 ("Processing Example") and 4.5 ("Bit-Level QSPEC Example") of the Y.1541-QOSM draft (http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-nsis-y1541-qosm-10#section-4.4) >and >Section 3.4 ("Example of QSPEC Processing") of the QSPEC draft (http://toolsietf.org/html/draft-ietf-nsis-qspec-24#section-3.4). > >Thanks, >Jerry > >--- On Mon, 3/1/10, Gerald Ash <gash5107@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > >From: Gerald Ash <gash5107@xxxxxxxxx> >Subject: Re: [NSIS] Last Call: draft-ietf-nsis-rmd (RMD-QOSM - The Resource Management in Diffserv QOS Model) to Experimental RFC >To: ietf@xxxxxxxx, nsis@xxxxxxxx >Cc: "Jerry Ash" <gash5107@xxxxxxxxx> >Date: Monday, March 1, 2010, 2:20 PM > > > > > > > >Minor editorial comments: > >1. page 35: >" the "Peak Data Rate-1 (p)" value of the <Bandwdith> parameter. > When the QNE edges use aggregated intra-domain QoS-NSLP operational > states, then the "Peak Data Rate-1 (p)" value of the <Bandwdith>" >substitute <TMOD-1> for <Bandwdith> > >2. page 101: >" directions by using the procedure described in Section 4.6.2.3 and > including in the <Bandwith> parameter within the "RMD-QOSM QOS > Description" field carried by the "forward" intra-domain RESERVE the" >substitute <TMOD-1> for <Bandwith> > >Thanks, >Jerry > > >--- On Mon, 3/1/10, The IESG <iesg-secretary@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > > >From: The IESG <iesg-secretary@xxxxxxxx> >Subject: [NSIS] Last Call: draft-ietf-nsis-rmd (RMD-QOSM - The Resource Management in Diffserv QOS Model) to Experimental RFC >To: "IETF-Announce" <ietf-announce@xxxxxxxx> >Cc: nsis@xxxxxxxx >Date: Monday, March 1, 2010, 9:38 AM > > >The IESG has received a request from the Next Steps in Signaling WG >(nsis) to consider the following document: > >- 'RMD-QOSM - The Resource Management in Diffserv QOS Model ' > <draft-ietf-nsis-rmd-16.txt> as an Experimental RFC > >The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits >final comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the >ietf@xxxxxxxx mailing lists by 2010-03-22. Exceptionally, >comments may be sent to iesg@xxxxxxxx instead. In either case, please >retain the beginning of the Subject line to allow automated sorting. > >The file can be obtained via >http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-nsis-rmd-16.txt > > >IESG discussion can be tracked via >https://datatracker.ietf.org/public/pidtracker.cgi?command=view_id&dTag=12558&rfc_flag=0 > >_______________________________________________ >nsis mailing list >nsis@xxxxxxxx >https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/nsis > > > > > ) _______________________________________________ Ietf mailing list Ietf@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf