Paragraph 3 of section 4 says: Because this cipher suite is equivalent to an empty "renegotiation_info" extension, only renegotiation_info" may be used rehandshakes. Leaving aside the incorrect punctuation, this doesn't make any sense to me. In section 5, suggest replacing all occurrences of the word "draft" with the word "specification". In section 6.2, s/NOT allow clients who do not offer the "renegotiation_info" extension/NOT allow clients which do not offer the "renegotiation_info" extension/. _______________________________________________ Ietf mailing list Ietf@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf