Tom, Thanks for responding to my comments. Allow me to respond. You wrote: > As a participant in netconf, I see authorization as one of those topics > which the Working Group sees as necessary but cannot be tackled just > yet. As RFC4741 says, > " This document does not specify an authorization scheme, as such a > scheme should be tied to a meta-data model or a data model." > and as yet, there is no data model; hence, no authorization, not yet, > nor, IMHO, for some time to come. This is just the sort of background information that a WG participant would know but that a secdir reviewer would not. Please allow me to ask a clarifying question. You say that there is no authorization yet. I think that could mean several things: 1) Existing NETCONF implementations implement authorization, ensuring that each user gets an appropriate and perhaps different level of access to the database. However, there are no standards for the manner in which authorization is performed or configured. 2) Existing NETCONF implementations require authentication but generally just give complete read-write access to the database to all authenticated users. 3) Existing NETCONF implementations do not require authentication. Anyone with network access has complete, unfettered access to the database and can modify it at will. Could you tell me which of these meanings is most accurate? Of course, it could be a mix of these but I'd like to get your real-world assessment of the state of the NETCONF world. If the answer is 3), we have a serious problem! If the answer is 1) or 2), that's acceptable in my view. Now on to the language in the draft. My comment was relating to this quote from the Security Considerations: > "Only an authenticated and authorized user can request a partial > lock." I'm afraid that this statement is not justified if there is no normative text requiring implementations to comply. I suggest that normative text be added to at least require authentication. With such text, the statement above could be justified. Requiring that levels of authorization be implemented is less important in this application. And standardizing the manner in which authorization is performed or configured (which I think is your concern with respect to the lack of a data model) is really not important at all unless NETCONF customers or vendors decide that it is. Standardizing an authorization policy format is a tremendously challenging task for any protocol and often not necessary. I hope that this helps you address my comments in a reasonable and achievable manner. The intent of secdir comments is not to impose unreasonable requirements. It is to point out issues that might not be evident to someone who is not a security expert. Thanks, Steve > -----Original Message----- > From: Tom.Petch [mailto:sisyphus@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx] > Sent: Thursday, August 13, 2009 4:00 AM > To: Stephen Hanna; secdir@xxxxxxxx; ietf@xxxxxxxx; > draft-ietf-netconf-partial-lock@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx > Subject: Re: secdir review of draft-ietf-netconf-partial-lock-09.txt > > ----- Original Message ----- > From: "Stephen Hanna" <shanna@xxxxxxxxxxx> > To: <iesg@xxxxxxxx>; <secdir@xxxxxxxx>; <ietf@xxxxxxxx>; > <draft-ietf-netconf-partial-lock@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx> > Sent: Monday, August 10, 2009 4:28 PM > > > I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's > > ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the > > IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the > > security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs > should treat > > these comments just like any other last call comments. > > > > This document defines optional partial-lock and partial-unlock > > operations to be added to the NETCONF protocol. These operations > > are used to lock only part of a configuration datastore, allowing > > multiple management sessions to modify the configuration of a > > device at a single time. > > > > The Security Considerations section of the document highlights > > the risk that a malicious party might employ partial locks to > > impede access to a device's configuration. Therefore, it states > > "Only an authenticated and authorized user can request a partial > > lock." Unfortunately, I cannot find any normative text (MUST) > > that supports this statement. The NETCONF spec (RFC 4741) says > > "NETCONF connections must be authenticated" but this is not > > clearly normative. Perhaps a NETCONF expert can point to some > > normative text requiring authentication and authorization for > > any party requesting a partial lock. If not, I suggest that > > such normative text be added to the partial-lock specification. > > > As a participant in netconf, I see authorization as one of > those topics > which the Working Group sees as necessary but cannot be tackled just > yet. As RFC4741 says, > " This document does not specify an authorization scheme, as such a > scheme should be tied to a meta-data model or a data model." > and as yet, there is no data model; hence, no authorization, not yet, > nor, IMHO, for some time to come. In the light of this, I am not sure > what adding a normative statement to this I-D would do; delay > publication sine die? > > Tom Petch > > > > > > Another security concern that I have related to the partial-lock > > operation is that the configuration might become inconsistent if > > one manager changes one part of a datastore at the same time that > > another manager changes another part. The resulting inconsistency > > could have security implications. For example, an organization might > > have a rule that either the firewall or the intrusion detection > > features must be enabled on a device. If one manager might lock > > intrusion detection configuration, check that the firewall is > > enabled, and then disable intrusion detection. Another manager > > might lock the firewall configuration, check that intrusion > detection > > is enabled, and then disable the firewall. If those operations > > were interleaved, they could result in a violation of policy. > > To address this concern, I suggest that the draft contain a > > warning that parallel operations are tricky and should be > > carefully considered. Sometimes, it may be necessary to lock > > a portion of the datastore that will not be modified, just to > > ensure the datastore remains consistent and compliant with policy. > > > > Of course, a human administrator using a GUI could easily > > run into this same problem if the human does not have the > > ability to control configuration locks. The human might > > look at the firewall configuration to make sure that it's > > enabled and then switch to another section of the display > > to disable the intrusion detection function. If the management > > console only locks the datastore to execute the administrator's > > request to disable intrusion detection, overlapping operations > > from another administrator could result in a bad configuration. > > This problem can arise even without the partial lock operation. > > Probably the best that can be done here is to include language > > warning of this sort of problem. Warning human administrators > > that someone else is also editing the device should help and > > giving these administrators the ability to easily communicate > > with each other to coordinate their work would also probably help. > > > > Here are a few minor issues: > > > > * At the end of section 2.1.1.2, the comma in the last > > sentence is superfluous. > > > > * In section 2.1.1.3 in the sentence "Manager A terminates it's > > session", the apostrophe should be removed. > > > > * In section 2.4.1, I think that the sentence that begins with > > "If someone later creates a new interface" would be clearer > > if the second comma was changed to "so". > > > > * Later in section 2.4.1, the sentence that begins with > > "A NETCONF server MUST" should instead start with "A NETCONF > > server that supports partial locks MUST". I think that > > paragraph should end with "all of the overlapping locks are > > released" not "all of the locks are released". > > _______________________________________________ > > Ietf mailing list > > Ietf@xxxxxxxx > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf > > _______________________________________________ Ietf@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf