Julian Reschke invited me to review the latest version of the IETF draft "Binding Extensions to WebDAV". See below for some notes about my person and my relationship to WebDAV in general. Document: draft-ietf-webdav-bind-25 Reviewer: Angela Schreiber, Day Software AG Review Date: July 23, 2009 Summary: ------------------------------------------------------------------------- Based on my work on the Jackrabbit WebDAV library and server implementation [1] I silently followed to progress of this draft and consider it to be ready for publication now. Being member of the expert group of JSR 283 [2] I particularly appreciate that the proposed draft very nicely fits the concept of shareable nodes defined in JSR 283. This has been showed by the extensions Julian added to the Jackrabbit Webdav Server [3]. Major Issues: ------------------------------------------------------------------------- None. Minor Issues: ------------------------------------------------------------------------- None Editorial Comments: ------------------------------------------------------------------------- - 2.2. URI Mappings Created by a new Binding I have the impression that there is a typo: "Note that if R is a collection, additional URI mappings are created to the descendents of R." -> "Note that if R is a collection, additional URI mappings are created to the descendants of R." - The document uses both 'behavior' and 'behaviour'. I am not sure whether the document prefers British over American english spelling. My impression is that both spellings occur (e.g. internationalization, marshalling, signalled and behaviour/behavior) ... but I'm not a native speaker. - The examples with 'CollY' (or any other characters following 'Coll') would be easier to read for me if it was written 'CollectionY'. References: ------------------------------------------------------------------------- [1] http://jackrabbit.apache.org/jackrabbit-webdav-library.html http://jackrabbit.apache.org/jackrabbit-jcr-server.html [2] JSR 283: Content Repository for JavaTM Technology API Version 2.0 http://jcp.org/en/jsr/detail?id=283 [3] https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/JCR-1733 Best regards Angela Schreiber Some notes about myself: I am a developer at Day Software AG and committer at Apache Jackrabbit. Among other things I was the original author of the Jackrabit WebDAV library and server implementations. I am involved in the JSR 283 standard work and part of the group responsible for the reference implementation. Since 2007 I am member of the Apache Software Foundation. _______________________________________________ Ietf@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf