Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-netconf-tls-06.txt

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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for
this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-netconf-tls-06.txt
Reviewer: Spencer Dawkins
Review Date: 2009-02-09
IETF LC End Date: 2009-02-19
IESG Telechat date: (not known)

Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard.

Major issues: none noted

Minor issues: none noted

Nits/editorial comments: one noted (as follows)

2.2. Connection Closure

  A TLS client (NETCONF manager) MUST close the associated TLS
  connection if the connection is not expected to issues any NETCONF

Spencer (nit): s/issues/issue/

  RPC commands later.  It MUST send a TLS close_notify alert before
  closing the connection.  The TLS client MAY choose to not wait for
  the TLS server (NETCONF agent) close_notify alert and simply close
  the connection, thus generating an incomplete close on the TLS server
  side.  Once the TLS server gets a close_notify from the TLS client,
  it MUST reply with a close_notify unless it becomes aware that the
  connection has already been closed by the TLS client (e.g., the
  closure was indicated by TCP).



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