Ray Pelletier <rpelletier@xxxxxxxx> writes: > On Feb 6, 2009, at 6:46 AM, Henrik Levkowetz wrote: > >> One comment, below: >> >> On 2009-02-06 06:28 Ed Juskevicius said the following: >>> The IETF Trustees met via telechat on February 5th to decide on some >>> proposed revisions to the "Legal Provisions Relating to IETF >>> Documents" >>> policy, based on comments received from the community in the last two >>> weeks. Please recall this work is being done to provide a work- >>> around for >>> authors having the 'pre-5378 problem'. >>> >>> The telechat was productive. The Trustees reached consensus to do >>> the >>> following: >>> >>> 1) Clarify the copyright text at the beginning of the BSD license in >>> Section 4.1 to read as follows: >>> >>> Copyright (c) <insert year> IETF Trust and the persons identified >>> as its >>> authors. All rights reserved. >> >> This doesn't work for me. I read 'it' in the sentence above as >> referring >> back to "IETF Trust" -- there's nothing else it can refer back to when >> the code has been lifted out of the enclosing document, and >> complemented >> by a license file holding the proposed license. I propose instead: >> >> Copyright (c) <insert year> IETF Trust and the persons identified >> as >> authors of the code. All rights reserved. > > This works for me. I don't have a problem with this version. /Simon _______________________________________________ Ietf@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf