Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-mpls-te-scaling-analysis-03

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Document: draft-ietf-mpls-te-scaling-analysis-03
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date:  2008-11-25
IETF LC End Date: 2008-11-30
IESG Telechat date: (if known)

Summary:

This draft is ready for publication as an informational RFC.

Nits:

-- Don't forget the new IPR boilerplate.

-- Abstract, paragraph 3:

Section 8 talks about MP2P, so it is not strictly true that this document only considers P2P . (Repeated at end of introduction).

-- Section 2, 1st paragraph:

Please expand LSR on first mention.

-- Section 2.4, 2nd paragraph:

Please expand NMS and EMS on first mention.

-- Section 3.3, paragraph 2: "The consideration must be..."

Is there a word missing? I assume you don't mean "The consideration" to mean the _only_ consideration, since you mention others below.


















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