I have started to updatre the document based on feedback.
My approach is to clearly make those changes that are straight forward,
simple end editorial.
For other changes, I need to hear (I guess from Russ) that there
is consensus to make such a change.
It may take a little more time before I have checked and evaluated
all comments.
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----- Original Message -----
From: "Frank Ellermann" <nobody@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
To: <ietf@xxxxxxxx>
Sent: Wednesday, July 09, 2008 8:51 AM
Subject: Re: Call for review of proposed update to ID-Checklist
Re: Call for review of proposed update to ID-ChecklistIETF Chair wrote:
http://www.ietf.org/Draft-ID-Checklist.html
Nits:
(1) Archive older versions in a plain text format as for
I-Ds (for use with various IETF tools working on I-Ds)
I can generate I-Ds if that helps. I can even submit those.
Russ, do you want me to do that?
(2) s/2434/5226/
(3) s/2780/2780 + 5237/
above 2 are done in my new copy
(4) I-D.bellovin expired months ago with three DISCUSSes,
please resolve that by time-out ABSTAINs (or similar)
There is a new rev dated Aug 03 2008.
That will now get picked up by the xml2rfc tool.
I will not comment on the time-out on ABSTAINs, that is an IESG
issue, not one that relates to teh ID-Checklist document.
(5) s/4181/4181 + 4841/
(6) s/4234/5234/
The above 2 have been updated in new copy
(7) Please add RFC 5137 (BCP 137) to section 4 as item 5
I do not feel confident to add that unless Russ tells me that this is
consensus and should be added.
(8) I-D.2223bis expired 3.5 years ago, and is flagged as
DEAD since May 2008
I know. I have communicated with Russ and RFC-Editor about this.
We will replace it with a reference to
http://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc-style-guide/rfc-style-manual-08.txt
Bert
Editor of ID-Checklist
Frank
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