Jonathan, I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-sip-ice-option-tag-02 Reviewer: David Black Review Date: 11 August 2007 IETF LC End Date: 16 August 2007 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC. Comments: This short draft defines a couple of SIP tags for ICE. It's in good shape. The only things I found are very minor: The "Unfortunately," word at the beginning of Section 3.1 should probably be removed. idnits 2.04.12 found an outdated reference: == Outdated reference: A later version (-17) exists of draft-ietf-mmusic-ice-13 Thanks, --David ---------------------------------------------------- David L. Black, Senior Technologist EMC Corporation, 176 South St., Hopkinton, MA 01748 +1 (508) 293-7953 FAX: +1 (508) 293-7786 black_david@xxxxxxx Mobile: +1 (978) 394-7754 ---------------------------------------------------- _______________________________________________ Ietf@xxxxxxxx https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf