Hi Ketan,
That solution works for me.
Thanks!
-Mallory
On Mon, Feb 24, 2025 at 12:09 Ketan Talaulikar <ketant.ietf@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
Hi Mallory,Thanks for your review of the document.Regarding your comment on the Transposition Scheme, there is no elaborate text on it in this document as that is orthogonal to the issues with RFC9252 addressed by this document - i.e., there is no issue with the transposition scheme as specified in RFC9252. Authors felt it would be easier to leave that part out and hence that paragraph in the introduction. That said, you have a point that a reader, who is not familiar, may find this harder to understand and hence we will add a reference pointer to the specific section 4 of RFC9252 on the first use of the term Transposition Scheme. This will reflect in the next document update.I hope this helps.Thanks,KetanOn Fri, Feb 21, 2025 at 10:17 PM Mallory Knodel via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote:Reviewer: Mallory Knodel
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Document: draft-ietf-bess-bgp-srv6-args-??
Reviewer: Mallory Knodel
Review Date: 2025-02-21
IETF LC End Date: 2025-03-04
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
Summary: This document updates recommendations "for the signaling and
processing of SRv6 SID advertisements for BGP Service routes associated with
SRv6 Endpoint Behaviors that support arguments" based on lessons learned from
implementations of RFC9252.
Major issues: None.
Minor issues: It would perhaps help readers if in the introduction to the
document that updates RFC9252, the authors quoted one seemingly critical
passage, namely the description of the Transposition Scheme:
This later form of encoding is
referred to as the Transposition Scheme, where the SRv6 SID Structure
Sub-Sub-TLV describes the sizes of the parts of the SRv6 SID and also
indicates the offset of the variable part along with its length in
the SRv6 SID value. The use of the Transposition Scheme is
RECOMMENDED for the specific service encodings that allow it, as
described ...
This passage might then be modified in a clearer manner given the goals of the
current document. Or perhaps this belongs in Section 4 on backwards
compatibility.
Nits/editorial comments: None. Well written and straight forward.
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