Reviewer: Brian Weis Review result: Ready I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. The summary of the review is Ready. The suggestions that I made in my Early Review have been satisfactorily addressed, and I see no further concerns. There is just one nit regarding this new sentence in Security Considerations: "While this is similar to other intent- based mechanisms, as the packets will also be encapsulated with necessary information to represent and fulfill the intent." I think the word "as" could be removed to make it grammatically correct. Then I think it's intending to say that the added encapsulation will aid in hiding an attacker's ability to "identify packets associated with a particular intent", but actually an attacker this motived to identify those packets will also be aware of the additional encapsulations. I would suggest just removing this sentence entirely, unless there is a different meaning than I understand. -- last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx
