Hello David, Thank you for your review. We will update the heading of section 10.2 as you suggested to "Service Name and Transport Protocol Port Number Registry". This is the registry, which also contains the brski-proxy and brski-registry and the brski-pledge should be in the same place. The update will appear in the next version of the draft (an intermediate version is available on the ANIMA git under https://github.com/anima-wg/anima-brski-prm) Best regards Steffen > -----Original Message----- > From: David Lawrence via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> > Sent: Wednesday, February 5, 2025 4:17 AM > To: dnsdir@xxxxxxxx > Cc: anima@xxxxxxxx; draft-ietf-anima-brski-prm.all@xxxxxxxx; last-call@xxxxxxxx > Subject: Dnsdir last call review of draft-ietf-anima-brski-prm-17 > > Reviewer: David Lawrence > Review result: Ready with Nits > > For the DNS Directorate, I have focused my review on the DNS-salient aspects of > the draft. > > The core protocol use of DNS-SD looks spot-on, so no issues there. > > This draft does a callout to RFC 8995 for core definitions, which does fortunately > include a definition of "Domain" that makes it clear that it isn't talking only about a > domain name in the common DNS sense. > However, neither 8995's Terminology section nor the one here define Domain > Registrar, and given that it is a reasonably common term on the Internet for which > people will have a preconceived notion of its meaning, it'd be good to identify in > Terminology here not only what it does mean, but to explicitly acknowledge that it > is not a DNS registrar. > > Section 10.2 for IANA is titled "DNS Service Names" but fails to mention where > IANA is registering this information. I believe you mean the Service Name and > Transport Protocol Port Number Registry, which is not a DNS Service Name > registry. Please add the registry name in the section, and delete DNS from the > section title. > > I've noted that a number of other reviews have already covered matters of > proofreading, and rather than attempt to de-duplicate the minor errors I also saw, > I've instead trusted that they were all already covered. > > > > -- last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx
