Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review result: Ready
I reviewed this document as part of the Security Directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These
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Document: draft-ietf-regext-rdap-rir-search-14
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2025-02-05
IETF LC End Date: 2025-02-17
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major Concerns: None.
Minor Concerns:
Section 1: The text talks about "RIR Whois services". Is there a reference
for this? If not, would a reference to RFC 3912 be appropriate?
Section 3.4: The document says:
~~~
This is acceptable, because this behaviour:
does not conflict with the current description of the link
relation; and
is not generally applicable, but instead limited to the context of
RDAP INR objects only.
~~~
I have two comments. First, it is unclear to me what "This" is referencing.
Second, the formatting is a bit confusing. Maybe bullets would resolve this
concern.
Nits:
Section 6: Bullets in the first paragraph would be helpful.
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