Dear Paul, I just realized my original email was not complete sent so, here the complete one: Thank you for the review and your overall impression on the document. I made some inline comments to your findings. We will address them in the next version of the document. An intermediate version with incorporated updates is available on the ANIMA git (https://github.com/anima-wg/anima-brski-prm) I made some further comments inline > -----Original Message----- > From: Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@xxxxxxxxxxxx> > Sent: Monday, January 27, 2025 6:08 PM > To: draft-ietf-anima-brski-prm.all@xxxxxxxx; anima@xxxxxxxx > Cc: General Area Review Team <gen-art@xxxxxxxx>; last-call@xxxxxxxx > Subject: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-anima-brski-prm-17 > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team > (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF > Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. > > Document: draft-ietf-anima-brski-prm-17 > Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat > Review Date: 2025-01-27 > IETF LC End Date: 2025-01-30 > IESG Telechat date: ? > > Summary: > > This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed > before publication. > > This was this reviewer's first introduction to anima. As a result, this review is limited > to document form, not technical details. > > It is a very well written document. It is however forbiddingly long and intimidating > to read. It has a very distinct repetitive structure. (Many twisty little passages, all > different, but very similar.) It seems like it could perhaps be represented in a more > concise way that would be easier to read. But I don't have a specific suggestion. [stf -- last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx
