Hi Behcet,
Thanks for the review. I've uploaded version -24 to address your comments. Detailed answers below inline.
Thanks,
Yingzhen
On Wed, Jan 29, 2025 at 9:03 AM Behcet Sarikaya via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote:
Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya
Review result: Ready with Nits
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Document: draft-ietf-isis-sr-yang-23
Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya
Review Date: 2025-01-29
IETF LC End Date: 2025-01-30
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
Summary:
This document develops a YANG data module for the purpose of configuring and
managing
IS-IS segment routing in the MPLS data plane. As such a large part of it
consists of YANG code in Sections 3 and 4.
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
It has the following nits:
idnits tool says there are 3 long (>72) lines.
[Yingzhen]: fixed.
Appendix A has not been referenced.
[Yingzhen]: Appendix A just provides a configuration example as most YANG documents. I don't think it needs to be referenced.
Spell out the acronyms like IS IS-IS, MPLS, etc. in first use.
[Yingzhen]: These terms are so well-known. I will leave these to the RFC editor to decide whether they need to be expanded.
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