Reviewer: Dirk Von Hugo Review result: Ready with Nits Dear all, I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for draft-ietf-bess-evpn-redundant-mcast-source. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area Directors. Document editors and shepherd(s) should treat these comments just like they would treat comments from any other IETF contributors and resolve them along with any other (Last Call) comments that have been received. For more details on the INT Directorate, see https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/ The draft specifies two procedures to address high multicast availability and resiliency together with better efficiency in terms of hot and warm standby support in case of failure. From my non-expert point of view it is well written, I only miss some acronym explanations and similarily found very minor nits as described below: P.4: procedures for EVPN PEs to ensure => procedures for EVPN PEs (Provider Edge devices/routers) to ensure BUM: Broadcast, Unknown unicast and Multicast traffic => BUM: Broadcast, Unknown unicast, and Multicast traffic P.7: [RFC9625], [RFC9136] and [RFC9572] => [RFC9625], [RFC9136], and [RFC9572] P.8: such as e.g., PE4 => such as, e.g., PE4 P.12: via the IRB interface, following => via the IRB (Integrated Routing and Bridging) interface, defined in [RFC9135], following P.15: Flow Group information in the NLRI => Flow Group information in the NLRI (BGP EVPN Network Layer Reachability Information, see [RFC9135]) P.23: SFG configuration (and not based the reception of traffic) => SFG configuration (and not based on the reception of traffic) P.26: label space identified by the Domain-wide Common Block label => label space identified by the Domain-wide Common Block (DCB) label P.30: G-source with e.g., lowest ESI => G-source with, e.g., lowest ESI filtering follow, as specified in => filtering follow mechanisms/procedures, as specified in Thanks - especially to all authors and contributors! Best regards Dirk -- last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx
