[Last-Call] Re: Intdir last call review of draft-ietf-madinas-use-cases-15

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Added "Wi-Fi" to the title. New title is:

Randomized and Changing MAC Address: Context, Network Impacts, and Use
                        Cases for Wi-Fi Network

Section 6 update:

Larger and more complex
   networks can also incorporate more advanced services, from AAA to AR/
   VR applications.  To the network, its top priority is to provide the
   best Quality of Experience to its users.  Often the network contains
   policies which help to make forwarding decision based on the network
   conditions, the device, and the user identity associated to the
   device.  For example, in a hospital private network, the network may
   contain policy to give highest priority to doctors' Voice-Over-IP
   packets.  In another example, an enterprise network may contain
   policy to allow applications from a group of authenticated devices to
   use ECN [RFC3168] for congestion and/or DSCP [RFC8837] for
   classification to signal the network for specific network policy.  In
   this configuration, the network is required to associate the data
   packets to an identity to validate the legitimacy of the marking.
   Before RCM, many network systems use MAC address as a persistent
   identity to create an association between user and device.  After RCM
   being implemented, the association is broken.

Section 6.1. Added the following statement:

Note that
   this behavior is against standard operation and existing privacy
   recommendations.  Implementations must avoid changing MAC address
   while maintaining previously assigned IP address without consulting
   the network.

Changed "fast-paced MAC address randomization" to "aggressive (e.g., once an hour or shorter) MAC address randomization"

Added informal definition of "Hospitality environment":

Hospitality environment refers to space provided by
   hospitality industry, which includes but not limited to hotels,
   stadiums, restaurants, concert halls and hospitals.


I also updated the draft to version 16 which includes all other recommendations stated in the PDF.



From: Lee, Yiu <Yiu_Lee@xxxxxxxxxxx>
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Subject: Re: Intdir last call review of draft-ietf-madinas-use-cases-15
 
@Dave: Thanks for reviewing the draft. Comments inline.

Best,
Yiu


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Subject: Intdir last call review of draft-ietf-madinas-use-cases-15
 
Reviewer: Dave Thaler
Review result: Almost Ready

Although the document has good information in it, I found a couple of
important issues that I think should be addressed before publication.

1. Neither the title nor the abstract is WiFi specific (or even wireless specific).
   However some places in this document appear to be very WiFi specific.
   If the intent is to be wifi specific or wireless specific, then I’d recommend
   changing the title and the abstract to add WiFi or wireless in them.
   If the intent is not to be wifi specific (and the MADINAS WG charter implies
   to me that it should not be wireless specific), then some sections of the
   document need work to just use wifi as an example, rather than implying the
   point is only relevant to wifi. I called out several such places in my
   marked up copy.

[YL] You are absolutely right. This draft is specifically about RCM in WiFi. I think we should add WiFi to the title and abstract. 

2. Section 6 talks about using a MAC address to distinguish "voice traffic coming
   from a smartphone" from "keepalive data coming from an IoT endpoint".  I think
   voice vs keepalive here sounds irrelevant.  Wouldn’t it be more correct to
   remove “voice” and “keepalive data” and just say “traffic”?  In such a scenario
   as the one described, it seems that the point it's making about using a mac identity
   is NOT about identifying the _traffic type_ per se (voice from smartphone vs
   keepalive data from a smartphone) but rather about the _device_ (voice or data
   from a smartphone, vs voice or data from a baby monitor). If you could distinguish
   the traffic type then you shouldn’t need the mac identity since you could
   prioritize voice (whether from phone or from baby monitor) over keepalive data
   (whether from phone or from baby monitor).  So the example in section 6 doesn't
   make sense to me as written.

[YL] We will remove voice and keepalive, and replace with traffic or data packets. I heard your argument. MAC isn't relevant to distinguish application type. This draft should only mention what MAC can be used, We will go back and rework Section 6. 

3. Section 6.1 says "Changing the MAC
   address, even at disconnection-reconnection phase, without changing
   the IP address, may disrupt the stability of these mappings for these
   peers, if the change occurs within the caching period." 
   This is true, but that would generally be a bad idea anyway since then you’d
   have persistent linkage by IP address which would defeat the purpose of the MAC
   randomization in the first place.  So saying it may disrupt the stability is a
   relatively minor issue to point out by comparison.  It’d be better to rephrase
   to point out that this issue should not exist if devices actually follow existing
   privacy recommendations.

[YL] Agreed. Will fix it in next version.  

4. Section 6.2 says about public Wi-Fi that "Privacy is the
   number one concern for the user."  Really? Can you cite a study that supports
   this claim?  I’d think that reliable connectivity (no connection drops) and
   bandwidth may be higher priority concerns for many users, especially novice
   users (e.g., kids) who are unaware of the privacy dangers.

[YL] How about replacing it to "Privacy is a major concern for many users"?

5. A couple of terms are used without definition and I find hard to follow:
   - Hospitality environment
   - "fast-paced" MAC address randomization (as opposed to fast paced MAC address
     _changing_)
   - over-solicited

[YL] We will address those terms in next version.

A PDF copy with my comments and a bunch of editorial nits inline can be found at

[YL] Thanks. We will make the changes accordingly in next versoin.


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