Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-idr-sr-policy-safi-09 Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review Date: 2024-11-06 IETF LC End Date: 2024-11-11 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: This document specifies how BGP may be used to distribute SR Policy candidate paths. It introduces a BGP SAFI to advertise a candidate path of a SR Policy and defines sub-TLVs for the Tunnel Encapsulation Attribute for signaling information about these candidate paths.It updates RFC9012. This document is Ready with two Minor Issues. Major issues: Minor issues: 1. Section 6.10 includes: > Note to IANA (RFC editor to remove this before publication): The new registry creation request below is also present in the draft-ietf- pce-segment-routing-policy-cp. IANA is requested to process the registry creation via the first of these two documents to reach publication stage and the authors of the other document would update the IANA considerations suitably. As I understand, if this document reaches publication before draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-policy-cp, Section 6.6 of the latest will be removed, and the opposite. However, the tables are not identical. In Table 10, Section 6.10 in this document values 5-255 are Unassigned, while in Section 6.6 of draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-policy-cp values 5-255 are Reserved. 2.The Manageability Considerations section refers to [I-D.ietf-spring-sr-policy-yang] which is Expired. Nits/editorial comments: -- last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx
