Tim, Thanks. Clarification on the Nit inline below. --On Friday, October 25, 2024 11:51 -0700 Tim Wicinski via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > Reviewer: Tim Wicinski > Review result: Ready > > All > > I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational > directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being > processed by the IESG. These comments were written with the intent > of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments > that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews > during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should > treat these comments just like any other last call comments. > > This document is the underlying specification in electronic mail > and its movement across the internet. > > I actually reviewed this document during the working group last > call process, and worked through several comments John L and John K > addressed then. > > I have been also following the DNSDIR review thread, and feel > confident the are addressing those issues to me satisfaction. > > One Nit: > > The acknowledgement section has this partial paragraph - some bad > xml? > > chetti contributed an analysis that clarified the ABNF > productions that implicitly reference other documents. :-) I wanted to keep the acknowledgment blocks/paragraphs in more or less chronological order. That analysis arrived before the WG got started and hence was not a contribution to the WG that would have been covered in the subsequent paragraph. However, the only information I had (or have) about the contributor is that name, spelled that way (I have vague memories of even asking but that was 4 1/2 years ago). I didn't want to guess about, or override, a preferred name or preferred case any more than I would want to do either with a preferred gender. So I tentatively wrote the paragraph and then consulted the RFC Editor, getting a reply in early May 2020 (again, before the WG was chartered). I was told their preference matched my guess and to write it that way. Does that constitute nit-picking a Nit? So thanks for the obviously very careful reading and for noticing because it, indeed, looks odd but it is actually as intended. thanks again, john -- last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx