Reviewer: Joe Clarke Review result: Has Nits I have been asked to review this draft on behalf of the OPS directorate. This draft updates RFC8059 to specify PIM Receiver RLOC Join/Prune attribute to connect multiple LISP sites when underlay IP multicast is used. Overall, I thought the document was clear, but I did find a few nitty issues. The biggest point of confusion for me was the mention of "oif-list" in Section 3.3. This is defined in RFC6381 (experimental) where they use OIF-list. I think at least an informative reference is needed for clarity of this term and the form "OIF-list" should be used. Other nits: Section 3.2: OLD: This field MUST be used only when the NEW: This field MUST only be used when then I think this form is a bit clearer with the normative MUST. Section 3.3: You have a duplicate "tree" there (i.e., "tree tree"). -- last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx
