[Last-Call] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6991-bis-16

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Reviewer: Giuseppe Fioccola
Review result: Has Nits

This document is clear for its scope. It simply adds new type definitions to
the "ietf-yang-types" and "ietf-inet-types" YANG modules and obsoletes RFC 6991.

The new types defined in the YANG modules are quite understandable, but I would
suggest to add some explanation, maybe in section 2, about the motivations
behind the addition of these new types (for example, the new date/time related
types compared to the date-and-time type already defined in RFC 6021).

I noticed that there are two appendixes about the changes from RFC 6991 and
from RFC 6021, which only refer to section 3 and section 4. I think it is
useful to add a reference also to section 2, since the tables there show the
new types with respect to RFC 6991 and RFC 6021. Additionally, you can consider
to move these appendixes as subsections of section 1.



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