Reviewer: Mallory Knodel Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-pce-pcep-extension-native-ip-32 Reviewer: Mallory Knodel Review Date: 2024-08-05 IETF LC End Date: 2024-08-12 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: I've reviewed this document and I want to focus my feedback on the security considerations section, though there are several nits within the document that I imagine will be picked up during the editorial process. Major issues: None. Minor issues: Security considerations are helpful because they provide pointers to other RFCs that contain relevant security considerations in related drafts. However, a reader does not have a useful overview of what those security issues are. I would encourage the authors to provide a short summary of the security considerations for this specification as well as linking to the primary source that goes into more depth about those considerations and how to mitigate them. That will give the reader more of an idea about which additional documents they should read, instead of asking them to read all of them and decide for themselves. I believe the experts who have authored this specification could provide more guidance to implementers about what are the security issues with this specification as well as guidance on where to look for deeper explanations (eg the already cited RFCs). Nits/editorial comments: The document requires significant and thorough copyediting, which would be nice to do before passing along to the RFC Editor. Automated spelling and grammar tools could catch many of these. -- last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx
