Thanks for the review! On Jul 29, 2024, at 06:10, Scott Hollenbeck via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > > "More information about IANA's policies and procedures for how the > cryptographic keys for the DNS root zone are managed (also known as "DNSSEC > Practice Statements" or "DPSs") can be found at > https://www.iana.org/dnssec/procedures > (https://www.iana.org/dnssec/procedures)." > > The URL is shown twice. The URL in parentheses can be removed. This is an artifact of how the XML is rendered in text. It shows fine in the HTML. > The [DPS] reference includes this URL, with a reference year of 2020: > > https://www.iana.org/dnssec/procedures > > However, that URL leads to a page of policy and procedure statements. This is > the URL for the cited practice statement, with a reference year of 2024: > > https://www.iana.org/dnssec/procedures/ksk-operator/ksk-dps-20240315.html The page at <https://www.iana.org/dnssec/procedures> lists two DPSs, one for the KSK and one for the ZSK. I would prefer to retain the shorter URL so that readers can see both. However, thanks for noticing the bad date of 2020: we will remove the date from the document. > I tried to validate the XML examples using the RELAX NG Compact Schema provided > in Section 2.1 but was unable to find a working online validator. It all looks > correct, but I can't confirm that everything is valid. It's always good to check. I don't know of any online validators, but I have just checked with `jing`, and the example does indeed validate with the compact RNG. (Thanks to Tim Bray for pointing me at this tool!) --Paul Hoffman -- last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx
